tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6546220461793184766.post988447819530506769..comments2023-03-27T08:52:22.025-07:00Comments on Ethereality: Villain - Part TwoApurva Joshihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10192708392887712811noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6546220461793184766.post-59441015349109415112016-10-11T02:26:20.755-07:002016-10-11T02:26:20.755-07:00Really a fab 1....😘Really a fab 1....😘Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11889923571515625516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6546220461793184766.post-47235380882539523472016-10-11T02:26:09.030-07:002016-10-11T02:26:09.030-07:00Really a fab 1....😘Really a fab 1....😘Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11889923571515625516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6546220461793184766.post-74434913844544622522016-08-22T21:47:33.560-07:002016-08-22T21:47:33.560-07:00Wow... wow... wow...
Apurva... Although I find i...Wow... wow... wow... <br /><br />Apurva... Although I find it less intriguing than part 1. Or may be it's just simple. I don't know why...I like complex things... the more complex a story, the more I like it. I understand that it's the second part of your story.<br />It is more compelling if you end a part it in a way that arouses a reader to read further.<br />Just like TV serials, you have that urge to know more. You wait for a whole week to know what will happen next. <br />It's predictable that shivani will narrate her sad story of her break up with kartik.People may predict it as a love story gone wrong and may leave your next part. I know they are at loss if they skip your story. But I don't want them to skip it.<br /><br />My analogy must be inappropriate but I think you get my point. Right? <br />It's just a suggestion. It's not a bad review or something.<br />So chill.<br /><br />I am waiting for your other parts. Write well! :* Anshulika Bansalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11183362275416262046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6546220461793184766.post-89482638756403211872016-08-10T02:03:52.591-07:002016-08-10T02:03:52.591-07:00Great :)keep it up #Apurva joshiGreat :)keep it up #Apurva joshiAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01789073578387616786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6546220461793184766.post-24589679440106149972016-08-10T02:03:17.494-07:002016-08-10T02:03:17.494-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01789073578387616786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6546220461793184766.post-78427705235640051702016-07-24T08:07:26.789-07:002016-07-24T08:07:26.789-07:00Thanks a lot!Thanks a lot!Apurva Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10192708392887712811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6546220461793184766.post-10770393981870911682016-07-23T18:44:42.231-07:002016-07-23T18:44:42.231-07:00Incredibly executed!!Awesome!!Incredibly executed!!Awesome!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com